bonnie babe

Hey, I think that the posts above have pretty much covered everything. I may not be correct, but, were you trying to write this story from a British persons point ...

I think that Moo has covered a lot of the problems with this piece so I'm just going to say what I think about the piece. For starters, you included ...

While reading this, please keep in mind that I have -1000 points whenever it comes to writing poetry. Please be kind to me and give me constructive criticism. I know ...

Tanosh Abur I had walked, it felt, for days and had finally arrived at Ziaras Fields. I scanned to immediate area to see if I could find anyone else waiting ...

Lord Voldemort *I figured that this SB has already become insane so what we really need is an out of character Voldemort!* 'Where did all these filthy muggles come from?' ...

Here we are! Sorry for being so late! PM me if you have any problems with this! Name: Tanosh Abur Age: 24 Gender: Male Race: Human Magic user or non ...

Ignore that post... -_-' *waits till 'the next day'*

Hey people, I’m back! Sorry for being away for so long. -_-' Please forgive me! Anyhoo I’m joining this! Name: Itai Yagami Order Name: Scythe Age: 18 Gender : male ...

Stuff! The story does have potential! You just need to use more description to set the scene... I mean right now in my mind I just have an empty room ...

I'll join, I will post later.;)

Kuro As soon as Chantelle mentioned money, I exclaimed, 'Ah! I-I'm sorry! It was very rude of me to just i-impose on you both like this...' I cast my mind ...

Bonnie Bonnie grinned back, 'Whoever said life was easy? Besides I can't take over YWS on my own can I?' Foxfire looked back at her, 'I think, for the time ...

Bonnie 'You're not half bad...' Bonnie heard as she fell to the ground. She looked up at the puppet and grinned, 'Right back at you! I'm Bonnie.' The wooden creature ...

Do all your discussion here. :)

Well, I will join... Why not? Real name: Iona Morgan Age: 16 Gender: Female appearance: Short and stumpy, she has ghostly white skin and short bed hair that sticks out ...